Monday, January 26, 2015

I don't know how to title things

Act 2 is finished! Chapter 10 is done and now I'm on to chapter 11. The deliverable isn't due until next Friday so I'll have time to edit and add things and all that jazz. But coming up is Act 3, which is probably my favorite. It's when things get very interesting. Seeing as I've already started act 3, I'll give you the first snippet of chapter 11.

The tents were white. The sky ranged from blue to gray to black. The people were ashen and the smiles invisible. But the color I saw the most was red.
Red was the color of a nurse's flush as she ran back and forth, carrying water and supplies to sick and dying men. Red was the color of the cross we bore on our arms and heads, representing the aid we delivered. And red was the color of the blood that dripped through our fingers and congealed on bandages wrapped around wounds of an even deeper crimson. 
Also I have that playlist I promised. The link is http://8tracks.com/jaydabird/rose-of-no-man-s-land

Okay well I guess that's all I really have to say for now? Writing is hard, if you're wondering. I have had the worst writers block and I'm going to have to go back and add a lot to this past act. But I introduced one of my favorite characters so I guess you have to appreciate the little things. I'll keep you updated on the deliverable. Seeing as it's a grade, I have to. 

Thanks for reading again. 


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